‘You exist as the stars exist,
participating in their stillness, their immensity’*
poetry compresses and pressurizes
the ragged edge of an improvisational ocean/sky
I confront the integrity of the line
purity of sketchbook ruminations now outlined
in graphite strokes of velleity
phase shifts embedded in oil stick
color whispering, pressed lips to canvas – bleed/drip
every touch a blossom brush with death
branching iridescent highlights of
a monumentally intimate asymmetry
I come upon the space enfolding
the butterfly lovers, immortal,
burning swans screaming in flight
silhouetted against a murderous apathy
internalized terror of what cannot be released
what rains down upon us, drawn and redrawn
by everything outside ourselves and our control
tracing a watermark of interiority
delineating Whitman’s path
between reality and our souls
infinitude revealed through our separation
I search for a home within
the windowless reading room
……………………………………………………
* from Telescope by Louise Glück
‘The land and sea, the animals, fishes and birds, the sky of heaven and the orbs, the forests mountains and rivers, are not small themes . . . but folk expect of the poet to indicate more than the beauty and dignity which always attach to dumb real objects. . . . they expect him to indicate the path between reality and their souls.’ from the Preface to Leaves of Grass by Walt Whitman
you caught me early with…poetry compresses and pressurizes
the ragged edge of an improvisational ocean/sky…ha…cool lines…tracing a watermark of interiority as well…the last two lines as stellar as well ma’am…smiles.
sounds like you may be working on some art, too. Great descriptors, many mediums. Hope you are well.
Beautiful words …
a monumentally intimate asymmetry….love it…for me this speaks about finding ourselves in the artwork, the things we pen to painter or put in oil on canvas…always peaces of ourselves..trying to define and maybe also balance that asymetry..or maybe trying to make sense of it..
I know that feeling well and like the way you have expressed it.>KB
I want to live inside this poem. Actually, I think I do. 🙂
You have captured it all just perfectly, the way we are all searching for that home. A new favorite of yours for me (and you now that is saying a lot).
I’ve read a few of your compositions, and I find them seducing and intriguing. I like the concept of a watermark of interiority….
This is stunning:
“phase shifts embedded in oil stick
color whispering, pressed lips to canvas – bleed/drip
every touch a blossom brush with death”
And I love the echoes to giants upon whose shoulders we all stand.
phase shift reality
rains and rains
shoots death rays
time breaks
stands still
stays
‘I come upon the space enfolding
the butterfly lovers, immortal,
burning swans screaming in flight
silhouetted against a murderous apathy..’ – THIS. i just love this. can deeply feel and breathe this. thank you so much for your magical poetry, Anna.
Anna, this is beautiful!
Admirably ambitious – with some sparkling stuff here – “You exist as the stars exist,
participating in their stillness…” “space enfolding the butterfly lovers,
immortal,
burning swans screaming in flight”
I’ll be back again for sure to see where this is going… Regards Scott http://www.scotthastie.com
Putting it all on canvas is the ultimate in expression. It’s preserved for posterity. Brilliant take Anna!
Hank
Yes that agonisingly fine line, the razors edge, you dance along it so nimbly !
Ummm …. Wow!
hey anna
tracing a watermark of interiority . . . love that line SO much!
swans in flight is an awesome sight
but set alight, well I have to say that
this image strikes me
as being ludicrously beautiful in a Scandinavian
kind of way 😉
when
silhouetted against a murderous apathy
well then
I am doing macabre cartwheels
(like normal cartwheels but in black 🙂
Nordic noir meets North American
deft gothic
Steven King vs Mankell or Larsson
or it could just be my reading
and in fact be Blytonesque
well
in my mind it’s
brilliant! 🙂
Oh how wonderful, Anna. The third to last stanza took my breath away. This will be added to my list of my Anna-Favs.
A fascinating look at life and death.
Nice read! Also, came here to say that I’ve quoted you in my latest entry. 🙂