(sampling Shakespeare’s Sonnet 116)
Celadon Blues (Love’s Neo-Lexicon) click to hear the reading
noetic consummation commences
supervocalic phrases, nuances of meaning
complexity multiplied in equations stating
love is not love which alters
magnify these variegated petals
artistry reveals glorious symbolism
palette knives scrape interference blue
survivor of the crucible, polished by rock
horizons of mendhi adorned canopic jars
guarding phenomenological concepts
simplicity obfuscates ecological profundity
unique realms of nonrepresentational poetry
naples yellow circumscribes french ultramarine
meaning somehow paradoxically conveys
relationships delineated by words’ barycenter
chromatic supernovas collapse
bearing all to the edge of doom
alive in drift chambers where saturation
blankets antarctic glaciers sloughing into
anti-cavitation valves emoting indigo
inducing transcendental release
sienna fidelity blurs marigold rituals
writ in luscious binary codes
unique expression dark flowers in winter
looking on tempests, never shaken
eons of sounding bells striking
deep turquoise limns curvaceous neologisms
shades of cadmium red entwine qualia
highlighting terre verte conceptual liberty
jaune brillant breaks all the rules at once
communication broadcasts a neo-lexicon
still ripe with exotic possibilities
dioxazine eyes scry these ever-fixed marks
I think this is what it means to be “painting with words”. Colors and symbols and things — rocks, and binary code, flowers, bells and canopic jars — love how you put different objects together like this. Fun to read and attempt to picture. I gotta go look up Shakespeare sonnet #116 though.
Yes, I significantly rewrote a poem that attempted to write poetry like nonrepresentational painting, adding bits of information from the essay explaining it. Then I expanded it to play around and see what can be done with the ‘formless’ form so to speak :).
hopeful still, despite a chaos of colour
Yes hopeful, maybe even due to the chaos of color :).
Some depths here I’ve still to plumb, I think. Shall work on them.
David, my poem, Soul to Tinder, for the dVerse prompt is here: http://chromapoesy.com/2012/04/28/soul-to-tinder/. This is an experimental piece I put up for NaPoWriMo, thanks :).
love is not love which alters…i like that the equations point to that…and interesting blend of imagery…really like the notes in the comments explaining your thought process as well…as it helped then to go back and appreciate it all the more…lots of colour as well…nice..
Thanks Brian, I was going to do a narrative poem but decided to save it for today. I really appreciate all your extra visits this month. After today, I’m sticking to dVerse prompts :).
i smiled all the way through this, as soon as i read love is not love which alters… a grin began on my lips and by the end was a big wide smile.
years ago, as in 25 years, i experimented with this style of writing, i never pulled it off the way you do, you make it seem so effortless and perfect…
my heart embraces your poetry. or vice versa, i’m not sure which 🙂
Three comments from you in one morning alone were enough to make my week. Then you show this appreciation for my darling baby (experimental poetry) and I think you’ve just set fireworks off in my writing space/studio!!! I’m so happy to hear that you’ve experimented in the past and would encourage you to keep it up (nothing I think revitalizes writing like jumping off a cliff). However, on the down side I’ll warn you I am frequently accused of causing brain damage in the form of neural meltdown, synaptic rapid firing, or plain old blunt force trauma. Seriously, you have no idea, my smile is as wide as the sea. Thank you!
This is so exciting Anna.. to find facets of this sonnet flashing in amongst an artist’s palette works magnificently…
Thank you Becky, I’m trying some new approaches to experimental pieces as this is a rewrite of Dioxazine Eyes Scrying, with more of the sonnet incorporated, bits from another more conventional poem Variegated, and parts of an essay I wrote. Sampling indeed 🙂 but thrilled to hear it excites!
Really cool Anna. Love that you went all out here. Funny, I used cadmium in a piece I wrote the other night,(not posted yet). Terrific job. Love the reading. Thanks
Yes, cadmium (yellow, orange, red, green) are paints I frequently use and I’ve always enjoyed the weight of the word, a little synchronicity there. Thanks for listening to the reading, I’m going to get my good microphone back from the repair shop soon so I’m looking forward to adding new recordings. I really appreciate your feedback.
The colors are so alive here! This has a real force to it, and motion.
Thanks Marilyn, glad to hear you are enjoying dVerse!