
Supercilious impulses flashing
keeps her achieving but alone
paper cut above the company
Operatic arias of accomplishments
form aureate clouds of immateriality
vaporous substances dissipate
Sesquipedalian sentences slinking
across reams of reports written
confound all but their creator
Impossibly immaculate mind
possibly perfect psychosis
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Wow! This is a real mouthful, well spilled.
All those hard words give the feeling of clinical dispassion, which may be necessary but leaves me feeling cold and uncared about. And there’s something about that clock… maybe the angle but it leaves unbalanced. I don’t know, I feel like I need to see a shrink, now.
I so admire the contracting perfections of the verses. Specially love the ending:
Impossibly immaculate mind
possibly perfect psychosis
Hope all is well dear Anna.
Is perfection a psychosis? It’s a definite possibility. Well done.
A definite case of uncurable verbosity! Great fun
Love the journey into a tongue-twisting story here.
Maybe sometimes the complex vocabulary sometimes “confound all but their creator”… which can be quite handy sometimes.
My goodness this is good! 💝