Sappho’s disastrous god
devoid of love and sorrow
wept not upon the metrons of her tragedy
His moonglow blindness
to her ornate melodies
rapturous abandon of polyphonic ecstasy
Her enduring wilderness
echoic lingering metaphors
gestalt harmony of a vision pale
Sunlit peaks preside over pulpwood coffins
effigies lit by Apollo’s fire-licked arrow
fed by the inexhaustible breath of Aeolus
burn filigreed epitaphs to her bright star
Notes: This was written for Victoria’s excellent prompt on patterns at dVerse Poets Pub. The poem makes allusions to Greek mythology, Christianity, the Weminuche Wilderness in Colorado where some of the peaks include Eolus and Sunlight mountains, poets John Keats and Sappho, and patterns in nature in its exploration of the recurring historic theme of the oppression of women and their expression. Together these allusions create connections of meaning, explicate the contrafacture and intertextuality inherent in poetics and religion/mythology, and indicate a deeper layer where we encounter the patterns that undergird the psychological entanglement we experience in our engagement with poetry, religion, and culture. It also demonstrates a pattern of themes within my own poetry.
I love this line: “Her enduring wilderness”
And this one: “Sunlit peaks preside over pulpwood coffins”
i know a bit of sappho and history…her exile and the political unrest at the time…i think in many ways our system supports the repetition of our attitudes over time…and even as we seem to make more progress…religion itself is a tool to keep thought processes in line at times it seems…nice use of language in this anna
I do so agree that an entanglement, an interweaving exists between poetry, culture, religion, as well as sense of self.
You are one of the best at interweaving themes, Anna. I knew nothing of the wilderness in Colorado to which you refer, and you’re my neighbor! I’m happy to see you here–it’s been a while, it seems.
Last time I was in Denver I felt like the wilderness had fled. As always you have taken many different threads of thought with deep history, etymologies, and meanings and woven them to form a poem with your unique voice, expressing your wide encompassing vision of patterns your reader might not have seen. It makes you a consummate artist as that is the motivation of art – to let others see what they would otherwise have missed. Always love your work so much!
if the gods embodied human nature, who are we to rise above them ? Good work.
Beautiful writing–that “enduring wilderness,” such a moving image. The gods do not always have our best interest in mind, it seems. Nicely done!
A rich interweaving – beautiful tapestry.
just excellent, Anna. loved ‘His moonglow blindness
to her ornate melodies..’
The last stanza was very powerful…love ‘sunlit peaks preside over pulpwood coffins’. Masterful as always, Anna…good to see you.
Amazing how you interweave themes going far deeper than anyone else. You are a scholar in your approach finding those patterns that goes like songlines in our history.. Brilliant writing (and I loved the part of Colorado wilderness I have visited)
the sensuous beauty of the words, reference to bright star invariably brings home to us of Keats’s unrequited love lending the poem a deep sadness…
There are so many beautiful gems here in Colorado. I don’t remember ever spending time in the Weminuche Wilderness, but I’m sure I’ve been through or near it many times.
what a gathering you’ve brought to us… loved the implements of nature
Excellent, Anna. Lovely.