I ascended to Olympus moments after my violent birth at Perseus’ hand. Watching as my mother’s blood still pooled in the virile sea foam. Redon painted me black, as if every cell was kissed by the dark snakes of my mother’s Underworld. Purified by Zeus every hair and feather flashed prismatic white. I became a creature of the sky. I vowed with my first thought to be wild, unrestrained imagination in flight. My wing words would transcend the song of earth, achieving the sublime. But all this was long ago, before I saw her. She was my soul, my golden bridle, my incomparable Sappho. The music of her poetry lured me earthbound, taming me.
an imploding singularity
awash in Dionysian pleasure
counterpoint to my Apollonian spirit
she expands and contracts to infinity
in fractals of complexity
my inward vision turns
to embrace her
she arcs in spiraling parabolas
a bloom on a beautiful morning
within this vale of soul-making,
temporal and inescapable,
all must be endured
an intoxicating creative tension
birthing poetry
Within the sphere of our epiphanal love, gentle waves broke upon feverish shores. She called me divine, beckoned me close but was overcome with feeling and fell mute, trembling. My spirit deprived her eyes of vision and my thunder overwhelmed her ears. I was the cloud bearing fruitful rain, imagination in all its real powers of elevation. I was the bridging symbol. Together we spun the synthesis of polarities with equal dignity. I vowed to bear her to the celestial heights. There, transformed to stars, our ill-fated forms would no longer cause our suffering.
as we rise she slips
caught in gravitation’s pull
heart shatters as I cannot
break her fall
fragments of her legacy
are buried in pulpwood coffins
(burned by papal decree)
the bow and the lyre
torn apart at the hands of the gods
we are forever separated
I was granted
constellation’s majesty –
from my unfathomable heights,
dream world of eternal ideas,
a lone feather falls
to anoint her earthly tomb
bone. spirit. blood. hoof (and wing). right ascension 23 h. asterism’s geometry. points in the northern sky. declination +20°. heartbeat transmuted. Einstein’s Cross quasar (new chambers of the heart, detached). encompassed in a canopic jar (supermassive black hole). quadrant NQ4. fusion’s glory heaven’s prize. area 1121 sq. deg. (7th). creative waters vaporized (extrasolar HD 209458 b) . unity and multiplicity. depth psychology paradox. Stephan’s Quintet collides.
Notes: You can find out more about Sappho here: http://www.poets.org/poet.php/prmPID/318 and read the myth of the Pegasus at these sites: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pegasus; http://www.pegasusproducts.com/myth.html. The subtitle comes from a painting by Christopher Le Brun which is at the Tate: http://www.tate.org.uk/art/artworks/le-brun-dream-think-speak-t03454. Please join me today for my first time hosting Meeting the Bar: Critique and Craft at dVerse Poets Pub http://dversepoets.com/2012/10/04/meeting-the-bar-postmodern-prose/ today at 3ET. I’d love to see you there!
this is so amazing… great words! (as always)
It is always lovely to see you, hope you can join us this afternoon :)!
will try – it will be nighttime for me, but i’ll make sure to have a look if i can 🙂
I think the link is open for 36 hours so if you do have time that would be wonderful.
already can’t wait 😉
Anna…color my pen beyond inspired! Just fantastic…you’ll shine like the super star you are!!! Can’t wait for you to take the stage…and this, was beyond brilliant!
Tash, your beautiful words here and on the re-post gave me a melting cry of joy. I wish I could bottle your magic to make people’s days and sprinkle it all over the world. What a wonderful world it would be :)!
And, of course, I can’t wait to see your inspired pen’s outpouring!
This is…I dare say I don’t have the words to explain the depth and beauty of this write. “all must be endured an intoxicating creative tension birthing poetry: This resonates within me, reaches the well where my tormented childhood burned the water. So glad I read it.
Susie, yes, I feel that too, our role as artists aligned with the path of the shaman as wounded healer comes from Jung and the depth psychologists. Such a beautiful way you’ve described the horrors inflicted on the young. Thank you very much for your kind words.
it’s pretty awesome how you manage to really have kind of two different shaded voices in this…the prose parts are more reflective, almost dream-like at parts and the poetry parts have a different energy…the birthing poetry touched me as well…very cool write anna..can’t wait until the doors open
Yes, using past and present tense helped and I wanted the poetic and narrative to be distinct, for my purposes it felt right. Regarding the birthing of poetry Pegasus had the power to strike his hooves and birth a spring.He created Hippocrene, a fountain on Mt. Helicon. It was sacred to the Muses and the water brought forth poetic inspiration when imbibed. In my imagination it’s how he and Sappho met. I am so excited Claudia, thank you again for the invitation!
first this is going to be fun…or at least i had fun with it…prose was first for me before poetry so…i love the thought of poetry taming the wild…ha…the last for me feels the most creative/abstract but even so it is really cool…i like how you tied in teh hoofstamps of creation as well….really cool piece anna…you will do a great job today too…
Thank you for the reassurance, I am a very private and introverted person so this blogging community has been a wonderful opportunity for growth. I did learn in school and work to be a good extrovert pretender 🙂 but it is easier there than in the realm of my writing/art. So happy you had fun with the prompt, it’s important, hopefully others will too. Yes, I wanted to take the real risks at the end of this work, play a bit, and it came to me in a flash this morning as I still didn’t have a final verse last night.
This is so POWERFUL. I love how you wove this.
Thank you Susan, it incorporates some of my favorite subjects so it was fun and challenging to create.
I could tell! Coming back for a second read soon, methinks.
:)!
This is not just one wow but… wow wow wow wow wow…a whole string of wow’s.
What a write, what a read. What a love story. What a legend you haven created. I am once more in awe.
Oh, huge smiles from me, like a bouquet of wows, they’re beautiful! The poem arrived almost fully formed, so lovely when that happens.
You had me at the title of your piece… I just LOVE Greek mythology 🙂 .. you brought me to tears as my imagination went to work on this 🙂 … Beautiful! Just beautiful!
Oh, what a tremendous compliment, so wonderful your imagination took flight :D! I am coming to read your poem now, can’t wait.
This is just wonderful! I love both Pegasus and Sappho (well, what poet wouldn’t?) and particularly love the story you have created around both, on both fantasy and symbolic levels.
Thank you, Rosemary (and especially for fixing my typo – it’s like having a hem showing). I’m thrilled you are also a fan of Sappho and Pegasus, it felt fated that they should meet in a poem :).
Really incredible. I need to spend days with this poem to uncover its many treasures. You are the master tonight!
Heavens, what a lovely compliment. It has been a joy to share it.
Woot! That’s great!!
Big smiles, happy you enjoyed it!
Beautiful close here – such a fascinating story. k.
Thanks k.! Bellerophon was the one to fall from Pegasus’ back after he defeated the Chimera. I wanted to keep many aspects of the original myth but then play with symbols, metaphors, and Sappho’s poetry to create something new.
Love it! Beautiful, inspired, powerful…..
Loved it! Inspired, poetic, powerful…
Thank you Sue, lovely to see you again!
A complex whirl of word and thought, beautiful to see and read. I especially liked this:
she arcs in spiraling parabolas
a bloom on a beautiful morning
within this vale of soul-making
Thank you for giving us this to read.
Thank you, very nice to meet you. I’ll be by to read your poem very soon :)!
magnificent!
Sheila, I’m beaming, thank you!
Beautiful writing, Anna! And a hearty welcome to dVerse!
I’m thrilled to be there, thanks so much!
So dream like, what a fascinating journey that flows beautifully. Thank you for the prompt, I enjoy the idea of blending poetry and prose…though wow you do it so beautifully!
Glad you enjoyed the prompt and joined in. I’m loving the diversity of responses so far and look forward to yours. Thank you!
This evolved into so many places that I fell in love this write. And Pegasus is one of my favorite mythology animals
Oh, I was hoping it would have that effect. You’ve done my heart a good turn, poems are like creative children, so beautiful when they are loved :)!
Pegasus has always captured my imagination and now with your astonishing poem, it arrives in all its glory. Especially liked the final stanza. Beautiful. K
Me too, more than I realized until I began connecting the dots for this poem. Wow, thank you, I thought I would be the only one to like that stanza with all its strangeness and science :).
This is beautifully written…the ebb and tide, the flow and flame, birthing…stellar write tonight ~
I wish I have more time to research/write on prose as its my weakest form…Thanks so much for the wonderful post and example ~
Oh, how poetically you capture it, thank you. I’m so glad the article was of use to you.
Prose came before poetry for me so I really enjoyed and appreciated this prompt. It brought me back to the beginning and has shown me how far I’ve come.
I love your piece… it’s fantasy and reality wrapped into a beautiful blanket of words.
That’s great that it gave you that perspective, thanks so much, it was a joy to write.
Past and present… poetry and prose… coupling and creating. You’ve done it all, Anna, with grace and intelligence. Inspiring.
Sorry Kim, my spam filter has been acting up lately and I had to rescue your comment. Thank you, inspiring is a lovely compliment :).
a very epic poem. ive always loved greek myth. this may sound very generic of me, but homer was always my favorite. its been awhile since i read it, but your poem kind of puts me in the mood for that. great read, enjoyed very much
Very nice to meet you, thank you!
this is brilliant! enjoyed every line…worth reading many times….you are on top!
Thank you, wonderful to meet you!
So many of us are inspired by myths, be they Greek, Hebrew … or so many others ~ this poem encapsulates a wondrous story beautifully
Thank you Polly, I enjoyed twisting this story and recasting some of Sappho’s poem into it to create a new myth.
the rise and fall…the heaving that interlined every thought….the ebb and the flow…loved this…
Thank you, lovely to see you again!
Beautiful, intriguing and powerful, Anna– the power of the feminine unites these pieces, yet there are interesting logical black holes throughout fracturing the narrative– black holes as in packed with energy and the power of the unspoken–xxxj
Oh, I like that description, this one certainly felt like it created its own energy once I began.
Not a good day for me, but I shall try. Whatever, best wishes for your debut.
And thanks for this exciting and powerful romp. Wonderful read.
I’m sorry to hear that but appreciate that you’ve managed to join in. I look forward to it.
Gorgeous work, Anna!
Thanks Mama Zen, hope you can join us; I’d love to read what you’d come up with. Getting chills just thinking about it :).
a stunning come-together of poetry and prose. the myths are luscious to read this way, Anna. thank you!
Thank you Jane, I thought it would work particularly well for this subject matter, how wonderful you think so too.
Classic subject, passionate emotions, and reads like Rimbaud’s Season In Hell…images, drama and emotion driving the poem but yours is not nihilistic into the fires below but rather to the splendor shining in the night sky, to the burning purifying stars above. Amazing and one of your all time best to my thinking!
Oh Gay, thank you very much for introducing me to a text I don’t know. I just read a bit about it and it sounds fascinating. I trust your judgement implicitly so I will give this one the gold star and put it in the keepers file :).
Cool – they were influential and way ahead of their time – Baudelaire, Rimbaud, and Verlaine. Then sometime you can read my poem inspired by it (Season..) if you ever have time, and see if you think it worthy. http://beachanny.blogspot.com/2011/03/garden-of-earthly-delights.html
Thanks so much for your generous comments on The Jazz Age. I assume as you said nothing you felt it met the criteria you were wanting.
Haha, sorry about that I was so blown away it didn’t occur to mention anything about criteria. I believe it exceeded my expectations and in the thrill I sort of lost sense of time and my role as prompt writer and got lost in the sheer pleasure of encountering art.
This is just fabulous. A new favorite among so many favorites! and this:
“she arcs in spiraling parabolas
a bloom on a beautiful morning
within this vale of soul-making,
temporal and inescapable,
all must be endured
an intoxicating creative tension
birthing poetry”
this is you 🙂
Kelly, you are getting a parade here at Chromapoesy, an honorary reading chair next to the fireplace, and a magic wand (though I believe you must already have one – a woman can never have too many, right?). Oh, I just heard from Mt Olympus and Pegasus will be the Grand Master of your parade because he adores your poetry :).
…this is extraordinary and beautiful….from one introvert to another, i know the encouragement from this community is priceless. Writing poetry is new to me and putting it “out there” is even newer…
and although I didn’t use much prose this time, I generally like to and will…I love how they compliment one another
Thank you Kathleen, I’m so glad the encouragement has been such a positive experience for you. dVerse has been my poetic home for the past year and a half, I love it. The use of prose opens up expressive possibilities. I think as we learn and grow as poets, a lifelong process, it’s wonderful to acquire new tools.
An epic prose/poetry tale! I just love the structure of trading off prose, poetry and images. What a wonderful collage. I am now inspired to dust off my Greek mythology books now; it’s been a while. Thanks for the thought-provoking prompt, Anna.
You’re very welcome, so glad you joined us!
I love your prompt and your own take on it. Right now I’m on “computer rest”–having to limit my time because of some health issues–it’s making me crazy. I hope to at least write by hand and perhaps post once a week for OLN. This is great inspiration and I’m so glad you’re on board.
Victoria, I’m so sorry to hear that, I hope you heal quickly. I have voice recognition software that gives me a break from typing and works pretty well, though you do have to ‘train’ it. Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement, I’m thrilled to be part of the team!
Again some nice picture illustrations…and beautiful imagery with well chosen rhetoric. I did not know that the relics of sappho’s writing were burnt by papal decree. …interesting.Must google it. Your work is a mine of information. Interesting you should say you are an introvert. So many have extroverted careers which require performance…Eventually it becomes second nature flicking the switch I suppose:)
Yes, Pope Gregory. Fragments were found buried in Egypt in the early 1900s (they weren’t burned). It does become like a switch, I used to meet several thousand new people each year, it was exhausting.
Clever fusion of mythos and logos with prose and poetry serving complementary purposes. At a far more smaller scale it reminded me of a haibun which i should have posted as linked to your discussion more a kiss away
Thanks John, I’ll check it out as soon as I’ve caught up on the links!
Epic. The prose does function differently from the verse lines. There’s a difference in tone but they fit cooperatively, not competitive nor unequally matched.
Enjoyed reading.
I definitely got some ideas after reading your article and following some links on it. Probably try to share on OLN or Poetics (if what I happen to write on can combo with that! :D)
I’m so glad it generated ideas and really look forward to reading it whenever you link it :).
This is great, powerful and overbearing! A revelation of a very informed poet. Very apt of being the latest addition of being the host. Looking forward to the forthcoming ones as indicated. Thanks for sharing, Anna!
Hank
Thank you Hank for this kind welcome. I generally do a lot of research for my poetry.
gorgeous! and your prompt was pure joy! thank you.
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Thanks dani, wonderful you enjoyed it :)!
Ah, 3rd read: “She” is Sappho! Much more fun the fourth time!
Sappho: 615 BC ! Never heard of her. How embarrassing. Thank you. I didn’t know the Lesbian connection. Didn’t know about “New Comedy“. Damn that Pope Gregory for burning her works. I finally found some of her poems.
Pegasus: Wow, a woman’s encyclopedia — force full of the matriarch theory.
Still, I had to look up Dionysian pleasure, Perseus …
One of my biggest obstacles to much literature and poetry is that if one is not a Greek-geek, then it is impenetrable. Similarly, if you want to understand Indian literature, knowledge of the Vedas, the Mahabharata are important. I enjoyed the Greek tour today – the links helped tremendously. Thanx.
The fractals and spiral in soul making were fun. The Ying-Yang theme was fun (oooops, I mean Dionysian-Apollonian) 😉
Puzzled: “Rodan painted me black” ?? Blue? isn’t he/she (Pegasus?).
Does your comment software allow you to check how many of your links were clicked? [WordPress does] I’d love to know how many folks read further. Or do they, unlike me, already know this stuff?
[write-if-you’d-like!]
Yes, ‘she’ is Sappho, excellent you’ve now been introduced. Another ancient poet, perhaps the first, you might want to know is En-hedu-anna: http://www.cddc.vt.edu/feminism/Enheduanna.html or http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enheduanna. Re: Not ‘Rodan’ (Japanese mutated pterosaur) it’s Redon (as in Odilon Redon) the symbolist painter and he created Black Pegasus http://www.wikipaintings.org/en/odilon-redon/the-black-pegasus and another painting of his http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.lifeasmyth.com/Redon_Muse_on_Pegasus.JPG&imgrefurl=http://www.lifeasmyth.com/journalRedonPegasus.html&h=450&w=351&sz=33&tbnid=nRzJbmTH32Pu1M:&tbnh=108&tbnw=84&zoom=1&usg=__-oagEEO5YDqAZK7_iTH4_sjehgo=&docid=vYS1_iXzSr1mNM&sa=X&ei=VV5wUNSXG-rMyQHilIHYBw&ved=0CEEQ9QEwBQ&dur=921, also black. Pegasus is usually depicted as white. WP showed one click for each link both days. Some people likely knew already or simply read the poem on its own terms allowing their imagination to fill in the rest.
(1) Thank you for the Enheduanna link — I shall read. Thank you for the teachings — you have an incredible amount to offer.
(2) Ah, but you gave us blue Redon — so it was odd.
And the Japanese Rodan is black!
(3) Your interpretation of why people don’t click was incredibly generous — to them. I am more the cynic after visiting poetry blogs after 3 years of philosophy blogging — a different crowd for sure.
[ I guess I will follow now, praying that people are done with comments. Another thing I note on poetry blogs is that folks do not follow — and so though you made replies to folks, I’d wager that no more than 1/10 will come back to see your reply. I never see poetry blog thread hierarchies more than 2 levels deep. So I made a commenting section for my blog. ]
PS – sniffling, as you haven’t had a chance to comment on my “prose-poem” for this assignment. 😉
1) You’re welcome. 2) Black Pegasus by Redon is the first picture featured before the poem so I am still unclear why this is confusing, maybe it is appearing differently in your browser. RE: PS – It appeared to me that you and another blogger are engaged in some type of disagreement which made me uncomfortable. In response I decided to stay clear of commenting on both poems.
@ Anna:
(1) Ah, as I scanned back over the poem I missed the first black pegasus — thanx.
(2) The disagreement with the other blogger was taken off line. So she must have reported here frustration to you to shut off communication — interesting. That was in September and three poems prior to the recent poems that you decided to avoid. I thought it was being courteous to take conversation off thread. Oh well.
Ooops, forgot to follow. Wait, am I mistaken, there is not “follow by e-mail” button here. You might want to activate that in your template — it allows folks to know what you respond to their comments — otherwise they have to keep coming back to check. I notice that your respond to everyone but (except for one person), no one takes it further. Activating the “follow” option may help that.
Or perhaps you do that intentionally — but though you may want to know.
So feel free to e-mail me [if you wish] or I may miss your reply.
WordPress switched to auto-follow and many people were forgetting to deselect the follow button, getting unwanted e-mail. As a courtesy to readers I took the auto-select option away. I run a small business, teach voice lessons, volunteer at dVerse, volunteer for two nonprofit organizations, and am a prolific artist, writer, and composer. Generally I don’t have the time for extensive interaction on my blog and have noticed over the past year and a half that other poets don’t either.
Gottcha. Best wishes on all those endeavors!
2) No one contacted me or has communicated with me about you, I don’t know what thing in September you are talking about.
(2) Not sure what you are talking about then either. Maybe the astrology conversation over at my other blog.
Gorgeous…I love mythology – powerful words, smashing post.