for David Chamberlain, Jr.
(inspired by his series of
Labyrinth poems)
here in the wilderness
encountering my fierce nature
thoughts lignify into woodcuts
thousands of barren landscapes
inculcating a melancholic picture
odd trees with finger thin branches
veiled in snow, grasping at the sky
painting blue stars in an empty heaven
I mourn what is irretrievably lost
something raw and enigmatic
written in my cathexis of longing
awash in an inaccessibility of meaning
I writhe sideways like an angry cobra
forming chalk outlines of the labyrinth
liquid mind streaming in slumber
an emulsion of ether, untethered
sands around me shift, amnesiac
creating fragments of identity masks
that reveal dreamtime spent in a desert
chasing my Minotaur shadow
there in the darkness I meet a Seer
who prophesizes my true nature
chained, I walk with two spirits
sorrow and pain expressing
nightshades of unborn ruin
I am merely the center-point
King Theseus of this lost tribe
ragged wanderer in exile
painting symbols in blood
a sediment of iconography
upon the walls of history
until Ariadne arrives like a mirage
finds me in the dreamworld maze
haunting the zero hour, engaged
in games of ritualistic sacrifice
and deftly cauterizes my wound
her sacred arts of magic
secure my inerasable love
offering an orgiastic thread,
triune passport to paradise
a string of beautiful words
creating an utterly pure tale
to reconstruct the mythic life
of my glorious and terrible wings
A really powerful piece of poetry. Although it is rich in dense imagery it never seems to bog down in it. A second reading is smoother. As a side note, there is a significant difference between a labyrinth and a maze. If that is its only fault–one term–it is as artistic as could be made. >KB
As the writer of the poem that mentions “the dream world maze” I can tell you that she is not confusing a maze with a labyrinth. The Labyrinth is a body of work by me, the dream world maze is a mental state referred to in one poem in the series. The two are not the same.
Excellent write Anna and not because of the allusions to my poems, your writing far surpasses anything I could conjure. Your language, the flow, the imagery and symbolism are absolutely perfect!
Well without the signposts to the allusion it would be hard to say she was not talking about “The Labyrinth”. You act as though it were a personal attack. I thought the poem was great. You should calm down.. I have never heard of your ‘dream world maze’. And there is a significant difference between a maze and a labyrinth. They are not interchangeable. >KB
No personal attack inferred. I was clarifying for you. Perhaps you should calm down.
I love your rich imagery and potent recall of myth. Your ending is superbly and quite sharply uplifting. wonderful work.
heck…this just bursts with energy …writhing sideways like an angry cobra…
forming chalk outlines of the labyrinth…. love the imagery and emotions connected to them…
Beautiful mythology here, Anna! Fascinating tale.
A poem that smacks of Joyce, laden with the richness, the froth of myth, legend; yet so much more, making all of us reassess our /glorious & terrible wings/ really dug this piece, still finding new pathways & tributaries on the third reading; thanks.
this is beautiful and epic (and i mean that in the old sense of the word 🙂 )…
i love your mythic life… and that last stanza really struck me, it so very well describes your writing.
this conveys a sense of completeness, rich and full yet not overburdened of imagery, with a stunning close ~
This is so rich in metaphors and mythology.. but still pulls you in a powerful read… Love it Anna.. your poetry is unique as always.
wow…what a journey in this…i love all the elements that you bring into it…your minotaur shadow…the fragments of identity masks….nice close on recreating the mythical life of your wings…pretty cool that you all are inspiring each other like this as well…smiles.
Beautiful poem, great journey.
emotion strongly felt.
Wow – and wow again. Loved this and found it interesting that you articulated (much better) the gist of what I was trying to do in mine with that same Arachne (yours stated beautifully) mine rather lamely implied. But this is grander and has more purpose. This poem exposes that place where daydreams fold into subconsciousness and then into sleeping dreams wrapping life into its stages and giving it purpose. Your work always staggers me, Anna.
The imagery in this poem gives me goosebumps. Loved the line about the angry cobra writhing sideways. Beautiful poem, rich in symbols and metaphors.
Wow, so very powerful. You have a true gift with words.
Beautiful, powerful, dark, foreboding, mysterious, rich – this is multi-dimensional and I enjoyed this immensely! I admire your ability to write at length and so well!
Powerful poem, much to feel and find…
Great imagery. Read, enthralled from start to finish. Well penned.
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A wonderful poem by my lovely fiancé.
Very well-written… the way you weaved Daedalus’ tale along with the images of the labyrinth… and Ariadne finding way to the creator with her charms and magic. Intense… As an admirer of Greek mythology, I found your work very beautifully done.
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Stunning work Anna ~ There is energy & intensity specially the last verse ~
Very, very well done! Loved the imagery very much! 🙂
I love the moves made thru this maze/labyrinth, either of which are perfect to explore in the mythical role of maker, shaper and shifter of worlds. We love these puzzles because they are the kind we can escape from as opposed to, well, y’know, the macro maze that we didn’t make 🙂
the picture would definitely make me shudder if crack and alcohol hadn’t already washed away my nervous system but I DO love it and the synchronicity with the PO is just so! 🙂
also I am currently listening to DC-jnr’s tunes and as a veteran raver with Ibiza qualifications (I actually think some sparks of my nervous system remain on the island) I have to say that these are sweet beats with deep kicks, my compliments to you both!
best 🙂
Indeed rich in content.. Yes, your imagery is quite fantastic… Thanks to the myth too. Re-reading is ofcourse inevitable as i dig down the beautification of your language use!
This is quite an original and imaginative poem, though the surrealism and intricacy of language reminds me a little of Rimbaud (in a good way). Nice use of “cathexis,” one of my favorite words.
Breathtaking…and fantastic!
I sunk into this in such a lovely way! Really fantastic, Anna….one of my favs of yours and my my spirit feels so restful having read your words again. *smile*