she turns the emperor on his head
as the sun penetrates the forest canopy
I listen for the sounds
wild reparations offered for all the blood
scanning for (in situ) signs of life
a heartbeat pumping in searing words
brazenly on a hot pressed page
wood transmuted, only resurrected with her name
surface so smooth that everything slides
liquid nitrogen cooled tongues
slipping from cottonmouths
stained only by washes
of colorful trauma
mineral night rising, a phosphorescent outcry
burning chemical fire layer by layer
until our skin becomes as
ineffectual as the paper
she wrote the truth upon
hush imbued atmosphere descends,
a pernicious intent
poet tells me, ‘every angel is awful’
not mine, lord,
not mine
I saw her at the dawning
and in the glimmer of his oceanic love
her joy lighting candles
in the holy of holies
that day I stood in the temple
in the land of the sandsky
(where I never could have entered before)
murmuring supplications
with an apotropaic wand
against the inevitable dark
secret cinematic sounds delivered
in the tone of teenage apathy
Video Games plays in the acoustic hollow
of a phoenix’s breastbone
an echoic pleading
one skin to another
I held her in the birthing
and in the slow murder of life
in her incandescent light, her
dénouement, her breath infusing
my own, whispering paeans,
singing sighs
Notes: Every Angel is Awful is a book by the French poet, Martine Broda and Video Games is a song by Lana Del Rey.
until our skin becomes as
ineffectual as the paper
she wrote the truth upon
was aline that struck me…and then the more mod feel of the close…and seeing this generation and what consumes it….the come back to skin there as well….the holding her in the end…quite effective piece anna
There is a contrast there between the pernicious intent, awful angels, inevitable dark against which you have to use apotropaic magic (I had to look up the work, but I got there in the end)… and the love, the belief, the fusion with the narrator, creating stillness and wonder and light.
This poem is an incredible conglomeration of emotion put into such delicate words…. As always, your vocabulary far exceeds my own, Miss Chromaposey, and I’ve no real appreciation of the gods or their wares, yet I must loudly say Bravo! Even in my own delicate layperson state I can spot the beauty of the language….. Very artfully presented….
meeting a storm… and we’re swept away by reading your words….the cottonmouth /trauma part was my fav together with the infectious skin cause she wrote down the truth
Astounding work. Verse four is something special, but it’s all good.
Wow! You truly re-create a tribal environment – a beginning sea – a starting point anthropologically but giving it characters and backdrop makes it tangible, momentous, thrilling. I liked this piece very much. It’s always good to read you, it awakens my awareness, allows me to see through your sensibilities. Wonderful.
secret cinematic sounds delivered
in the tone of teenage apathy
Video Games plays in the acoustic hollow
of a phoenix’s breastbone
an echoic pleading
one skin to another
is just wowser!!! 🙂 hey Anna
from the first line I am sucked in: she turns the emperor on his head.
just love that line, for all its simplicity and the style of the consequential image is fantastic
and ‘every angel is awful’ is a smart and great incorporation . . . a perfect fit
which is what I was having by the end of the extract at the top of this box.
thank you anna
all the best 🙂