incendiary convergence, blood-dark magnolia
caught in a wounded harvesting, profound incursion,
an exile – suicide volition in a fading Arcadia
oscillating secrets, pleasure traversal
dreaming plunge on a transparent, violet night
blue smoke ushers a vestigial solemnity
(the text intervenes –
a mutilation which language
supports and denounces*)
cavernous figurations, internal adorations
aesthetic conceptions underscoring
an invented landscape
elegant silence of seclusion’s verdancy
ephemeral horizon, an evasive, mirrored shore-line
inclination, reflection, formidable curiosity
abstraction of Diebenkorn’s expressive,
succulent brush-strokes
dancing exclamations of luminosity
hieroglyphs of absence enabling
an atmosphere of poetic contingency
glistering disquisitions, light echoes – shadow colors
bewitching lexicons, internal archways of lavish resemblances
banished beauty, castles built on unbounded mists
pale branches atop evasive stones, incommensurate
reaching toward scorched estuaries
impenetrable worlds of hearth ash
remains of an intense art
painted mountains, the apparent vanguards,
figurative defacements of a gestating destiny
* from Anne-Marie Albiach’s The Wasting Away “of Chance”
posted for Charles Miller’s dVerse prompt Meeting the Bar: Form for All and was created following a random method of word selection (including allowing another poet to choose words) from multiple texts and then arranging them poetically. The texts include the complete novels of Jane Austen, Women’s Poetry in France 1965-1995 translated by Michael Bishop, Possession by A.S. Byatt, American Hybrid A Norton Anthology of New Poetry, Gerhard Richter Paintings from Private Collections, and Richard Diebenkorn The Berkeley Years 1953-1966. Please join us at dVerse Poets Pub.
nice…this has the feel of an abstract painting and yet you make us see parts of it very clearly…figurative defacements of a gestating destiny…wonderful anna
ha. this was right up your alley anna…it plays into your style well..great drop of the quote in there…it fits perfect…nice energy to start as well with incendiary…the elegant silence line was way cool…dancing exclamations of illumancy….ha….cool write anna…nice
Wow, love that last line the best, but it’s all wonderful!
Yes, this dada nonsense, like found poetry still requires us to shape it, to rewrite its purpose, to redirect its path; and these things you do wonderfully. Like the line /underscoring an invented landscape/ which speaks for most of, much of our poetics.
You really have woven the phrases together well, Anna. This exercise fits you, I think. I especially liked ‘dancing exclamations of luminosity’ and ‘elegant silence of seclusion’s verdancy’ and the way you used them.
I particularly liked :
“cavernous figurations, internal adorations
aesthetic conceptions underscoring
an invented landscape”
You’ve selected from a fantastic range of works!
wonderful, artistic like brushstrokes on a canvas leaving the interpretation to the audience ..
Rowan picked out my favorite section–I especially think the phrase “cavernous figurations” is resoundingly good!
Beautiful execution of the method. I think you paint wonderful landscapes of both soul and material world. As always superlative 🙂 and you method really captures the spirit of dada and surealism.
…Jane Austen’s was a great choice and i can see here how you’ve taken her artistry into another level… smiles…
magnificent ! Loved the concluding line!
I struggle to find Jane Austen in there, except for her tidy spirit, but what great use you have made of all the other academic works! Poetry out of dry academic discourse.
Nice work, stitching the abstract
It’s fractious but still seamless. Really interesting poem.
impenetrable worlds of hearth ash
remains of an intense art
I really felt these words. Congrats.
some really amazing imagery. Tiffany glass poetry.
This is an utterly amazing Dadaist poem- anti-form with beautifully rendered form, a fiery vocabulary- just spectacular. -Mike
Oh, that was a good idea, to use several texts. I am learning there are many ways to make Dada. Must try this one myself some time! You did a wonderful job with it.
GReat word combinations worked very well
I’ve always wondered what it would be like to write like Pollack painted…. Picasso? Mondrian… I gave you a link to another of my “painting with sound” poems, if you are interested. “hieroglyphs of absence enabling” is just one of the many great juxtapositions in your piece. This poem is right up my alley. Thanks for stopping by….