‘We are committed to an unqualified act,
not illustrating outworn myths or contemporary alibis.
One must accept total responsibility for what he executes.
And the measure of his greatness will be the depth
of his insight and courage in realizing his own vision.
Demands for communication are presumptuous and irrelevant.’
– Clyfford Still, Abstract Expressionist Painter
Calligraphic signifiers rouse masterful enumerators
an experiment with a curl of smoke, perhaps . . .
there’s a way to measure time in that
she felt her body astonishingly vague
the wave nature of electrons taking over
words being wind or web
sound and suggestion speared
open . . .
lively and intact in a recurring wave
of arrival.
the soul establishes itself.
language seduces astral bodies,
inscribing their orbits . . .
before one’s shadow ever grew
out of the field into thoughts of tomorrow.
definition of a proper sense of distance –
a dog barking off in the barn, a mystical stroke.
our pellucid order blown apart
in the mysterium tremendum
bouquets of adoration and
certitude unending . . .
to trace you in
the charcoal outlines
of angels
enshroud your song
in rice paper
say that a ballad
wrapped in a ballad,
casting hollow precipices,
jousts firm convictions
underneath the cumulous chatter of troubled skies
I am threshing felicity
for we are language – lost
longing to be free, outside, but we must stay
posing in this place. we must move
as little as possible . . .
we see only postures of the dream,
satiated by pearls of ancient treasure
paths of glacial time pouring over steppes
white irises gleaming on clay surfaces,
pounded stardust on our filigreed emotions
Fuck! I want to be bound by devotion!
Tortured by passion!
in the cavern you understand how
a shadow works
because you’ve brought your own light . . .
free will in blind duel
half-life elements unwinding
earth as thought of the sea
I will dream you.
draw you.
that is the tune but there are no words . . .
The words are only speculation.
(from the Latin speculum, mirror):
they seek and cannot find
the meaning of the music –
I seek shelter along tantalizing downspouts
a tremulous, daring surrender
skin lost borders
merged
traditional imagery fills up
with unfamiliar shadows
(if properly abstract)
the strewn evidence meant something,
the small accidents and pleasures –
something like living occurs, a movement
out of the dream into its codification . . .
how many people came and stayed a certain time,
uttered light or dark speech that became a part of you
filtered and influenced by it, until no part
remains that is surely you
those voices in the dusk –
she meant energy & how in her dream
it came back to her
she hummed her own notes . . .
volumes of secrets to teach
Socrates
the leashed stars kindle thin
perpendicular
clear space of blackness
tiny words of substance cross
the darkness
uniform substance,
a magma of interiors . . .
concede/merge/meld
suck wonder and
lyrical promises amidst this
crumbling compulsion of syllables
float in ephemeral delirium
avidity penultimate in a
fugitive dialogue of masterwork
a desirous, glowing, sensual unraveling
Notes: This is a cento, a poem made up of lines from other poems, like a collage. This piece cheats a bit by using some lines from my own work too. Lines are pulled from John Ashbery’s Self-Portrait in a Convex Mirror, Ray DiPalma’s Rebus Tact, Maureen Owen’s African Sunday, and Susan Howe’s Speeches at the Barriers. Thanks to Samuel Peralta for the nourishing prompt at dVerse Poets Pub.
dang…i was right…hehe…but you wove it together very cool…right fromt he get go with…an experiment with a curl of smoke, perhaps . . .
there’s a way to measure time in that….nice….it really took off for me though at…I am threshing felicity
for we are language – lost
longing to be free, outside, but we must stay
posing in this place. we must move
as little as possible . . ….and each stanza after that was just pow pow pow….nice…
Haha, I didn’t see a paygrade on the bar code, I’ll have to pay closer attention :). Wonderful that the poem reached escape velocity for you at that stanza.
Clever and intense development of the form
Thank you John, it will be fun to see what direction others took.
Wow! You really got carried along with this…great read.
I was inspired – glad to hear it worked for you. Very nice to meet you.
I like what you did with the form. I don’t think it is ‘cheating’ at all to use lines from your own poems. I love the idea of ‘threshing felicity’ and I often think about the people who stay in one’s life a certain time and utter things that become part of one, so much so that one doesn’t even know where the other originated. As always, your poetry is complex and necessitates more than one read. A fine accomplishment here, Anna.
Thank you, Mary, especially for taking the time to reread :).
A mad dance, which must be danced!
So true.
One word… wow!
:D!
“Calligraphic signifiers rouse masterful enumerators
an experiment with a curl of smoke, perhaps . .”
. . .
“the strewn evidence meant something,
the small accidents and pleasures –
something like living occurs, a movement
out of the dream into its codification . . .”
By the end I get that there is a moment of authentic pleasure in the unraveling just before the codification is set. And that moment is worth living for. One of the problems I have with the cento is controlling voice/tone, but your theme uses that well as the narration shows “she” pulling back from complete absorption more than once. (I may have imagined this, but I sure liked it!)
You may find interest in a post on my thinking blog: Art for Art’s Sake: an Apology
Yes, I look forward to reading it very much. I don’t think you imagined that pulling back at all. I wanted to work within the themes presented by the original poems but expand/contract them where required. I think this interchange also influenced the action of actors within the poem. I do love experimenting and this seemed like a glorious opportunity to do it.
Beautifully wrought – love the last stanza especially
Thank you, I’m a bit proud as that’s the stanza I cheated on the most, only two lines are from other poets. I look forward to reading yours.
So I was wrong about you pulling together fragments of epic verses from the mythologies of twelve different ancient civilizations… but what a magnificent turn you did here. I recognized Ashbery and Howe, but the others were less familiar. The beauty of this form is that the cento author has the freedom to use the vernacular of several different tongues – something you’re already adept at. Bravo!
That is an excellent idea for my second cento :). This was an incredibly fun and challenging prompt. I can’t thank you enough for the joy of experimenting it brought.
Well, you’re welcome! And please, tap me on the shoulder for your next cento. I’d love to read it, but there are so many blogs to follow, I may miss it. 🙂
I agree with Samuel – especially for someone new to the form, you’ve mastered it rather adeptly right out of the gate … this finely wrought and like others, I found myself re-reading for nuances and some meanings … it was all there and in stellar form. Very fine writing. Truly.
http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/09/accept-shadows-centon.html
Thank you, this is a beautiful compliment. I deeply appreciate the re-read as I intend for my poetry to blossom upon deeper engagement.
Very flowing – a single piece – I love the wrapped ballads. (And I love Clyfford Still = such an interesting epigraph – I don’t know if that’s the right word. ) k .
The Clyfford Still Museum is in Denver but I haven’t managed the trip yet. I look forward to it. I have always been very drawn to deKooning and Frankenthaler though I do have a Still book. Regarding the wrapped ballads I had used a line about Beethoven’s sonata within a sonata previously and enjoyed the little internal connecting of poetic dots from that piece to this one.
this sparkles and invigorates. you’ve connected some amazing thoughts, phrases, and sentiments in this one place. and still it seems there is one, utterly brilliant mind at work here. fascinating!
Thank you Jane, I think I will try this again. Like the erasure poem it creates unique opportunities for expression.
wow anna…very cool and passionate piece..love that you started it with the quote as well…set the stage nicely for what followed…
Thanks Claudia, I was hoping the quote would function literally and metaphorically with its placement indicating its primacy. I felt it passionately so it’s wonderful to hear that came across.
Really cool Anna. You brought all these pieces together flawlessly, into one, seamless work of art. Love it.
High praise, thank you so much :D!
beautiful
it feels how i feel
i am terrified of the war filled mania of this world
trying to be still and gentle
hopeful
so much feeling
Yes, I felt on the inside of this piece too :).
I like the seduction of language specially the last stanza ~ Great work in weaving the words and lines from others work ~
Thank you, it was a fascinating process.
I was enthralled reading this. I won’t bother to quote back to you the lines I most liked. I liked so many. It’s amazing what you created. And like many others, I like the last stanza the most.
Oooo, enthralled, what a great descriptor, thank you!
This is incredibly cool.
There you go making my day, thanks!
I can’t believe this!!! How did you manage to work a poem this long in this form? You amaze me, Anna. Could you lend me a bit of your IQ???
Haha, of course Victoria, thank you for such amazingly kind feedback!
This is so full and rich. You are a master weaver of words. This is my favorite:
“traditional imagery fills up
with unfamiliar shadows
(if properly abstract)
the strewn evidence meant something,
the small accidents and pleasures –
something like living occurs, a movement
out of the dream into its codification . . .”
It’s all very meaningful to me at this point of my life due to the spiritual paths I’m walking right now. Thank you for sharing your gifts!
I admit to rearranging those lines to meet my own thematic/spiritual exploration so it’s lovely to hear it resonated with you. The entire process was intriguing and fun!
Is it okay to be rendered speechless by this? Your words + their words makes for a tour de force…a verbal assault, if you will. You have penned a brand new masterpiece…a journey of spirit that was both invigorating (and intimidating! 😉 )
Aw, you do my heart good, Tash, thank you ever so much :D!
I wondered what was happening. It seems like different voices. No wonder!! 😀 Quite a lot of fire in this one, I wish you included audio. 🙂
Haha, at least you didn’t jump to the conclusion I’d lost my little rabbit mind :D! I will have to record it, though I’m terrible with impressions so they’ll all sound like me :).
Brilliant work!!
Thank you, very nice to meet you.
A masterful weaving of other poets words with your own. Very nice!
Susie, lovely to see you again!
A very vivid collage! Tightly woven… Hugs xoxoxo
Olivia, I appreciate your feedback :).
Dense and masterful work, Anna. I love the way you layered the textures and the intensity that built throughout the poem. Excellent work.
Yes, I didn’t quite catch on to the intensity when writing it but I think it was part of the process, since I was not using my own voice for most of it. A fascinating experience, your comments mean a lot to me.
Very rich and exotic. Love the passion throughout and especially, in the ending. Bringing one’s shadow to light, I love that also. I could pick so many great lines out of this. Such a satisfying pleasure to read.
What a beautiful compliment, I deeply appreciate it!
wow. wow wow. this was like walking through a rich tapestry of language and imagery and magic.
“say that a ballad
wrapped in a ballad,
casting hollow precipices,
jousts firm convictions
underneath the cumulous chatter of troubled skies”
“in the cavern you understand how
a shadow works
because you’ve brought your own light . . .
I will dream you.
draw you.”
some of my favorites, but i was mesmerized all the way through, i didn’t want it to end.
Mesmerizing is fantastic, thank you!