- Jody Graham (my grandmother)
- Anna (Graham) Montgomery
- Sarah Reynolds (my cousin)
Mnemosyne, grandmother,
whose many names
are older than memory itself
enfolds herself within a Magpie spirit cloak
and spins forth a world where her
Muses bear daughters
She flies from her home
where I am forbidden to travel
Blue Lake upon Taos Mountain
through the Pueblo at the mouth
of Red Willow Canyon
Calling her two eldest granddaughters to her side,
a pilgrimage to Conifer Mountain
three Horarctic Magpies
hudsonia here in the Rockies
forage in the blue-eyed grass
walking along the grey fox-trod path
pat down by elk hooves
Good morning Grandmother, I am singing today
Juniper bush patches
quilted with kinnikinnick
orange paintbrushes dotted with
columbines rise above
toadstools and ferns
black bear stalks the wood pile
She begins to mend what is
broken but her own
we are broken but her own
They’ve never come this far
this high upon the mountain
alpine yarrow beneath the
ever changing light, a forest of aspens,
blue spruce, and bristlecone pines
she nurtures and connects
intimating a heroic form to life
Magpies are inventors via
expansive executive function
insightful passerines
‘catch me if you can’ tricksters
who create their own tools
to dig up the truth
Black beak burrows damp earth
Grandmother is making cache holes
while aspen eyes keep watch
she buries a writing tablet,
aulos, veil, dual faced masks
scrolls, cithara, globe, and compass
flashes her eye grounding memory
leaves her true gifts and looks me in the eye
Grandmother your granddaughters are waiting for the time of unearthing
The three begin to
sing one another’s songs
preparing to fly home for
Magpies, like their sisters Ravens,
recognize themselves in the mirror
I love this, beautiful..i may come back to say more, but right now, just beautiful, the ending creates home
My grandmother, who died 25 years ago this fall, was my spiritual home, grand in every respect. My cousin Sarah and I, who for a while were raised together like sisters, think of her every day and have similar dreams about her. This Sunday three magpies were out foraging in the yard. My grandmother’s son, my father and I had finished a long talk about Ravens (which are our frequent Corvidae visitors). Then arrives my grandmother’s favorite bird, the Magpie, that in three and a half years I’d never seen on the mountain. It seemed like the right time to try again to honor her in poetry. Thank you for your kind words.
So, I’ve come back, just to say, I found the nature elements of your poem especially moving, thank you for telling me more in your reply, wonderful when real life naturally resonates poetry, experience and meaning, that can, if grasped fully, create something moving and beautiful…the ending still feels like home, but also i neglected to say, I found that stunning, that it felt like home, and was a little lost for words, as that is an unusual response for me. Truly Stunning Anna
Thanks so much for coming back and adding more lovely words, I feel spoiled in the best way!
Fine weave here, Anna, artflly and gracefully weaving a nest for three magpies who are sisters, Muses, Furies (perhaps?) and Fates, triune apsects of the one lunar being — the genetics of poetry I think is undeniable, though its surely not a given. (The way alcoholism is a family disease and an acquired – slow-pickeled — taste.(There are three drinking cups on my father’s bardic crest – he taught me my liquor, but I learned to sing from my oldest grandfather, far back in the million-year dreamtime.) Anway, this is gorgeous and clean and spare of densest constructions while still thinking three deep. Fare thee well at your convocation of magpies. – B
Brendan, I struggled with this poem for so long and it finally flowed out with some sense of wholeness this morning. I’ve tried writing several poems to the grandmother I loved so deeply who sung my soul into me. I hoped it would still contain multivalence without employing too many trickster tools and I’m relieved that I have done her and the incarnation of the lunar being some justice here. Thank you for your kind words.
nice…this is really cool…love the imagery and the grandmother calling in those she has a-mused as well as the sisters seeing themselves in each other…the metaphor for writers is tight…i wish there were more opportunities for writers to come together IRL and be encouraged with each others musings…
Thank you, it is a lovely thought to hold a convocation of writers in real life. dVerse sure is doing a fine job of that encouragement and it is truly a blessing to me. Mirroring each other is a fundamental role of humans, a great gift we give one another. Brian, you’re an inspiration!
smiles…still appreciate this one…and the months since have been able to meet many a writer which is pretty cool….really was captured by the muses in that opening stanza in this and this is a fine example of the symbolism we are focusing on today…
Mother of Muses, grandmother of time, magpies and sisters, music made in the mountain mornings pure and sweeter than that throaty caw, yet of it, certainly. I can’t separate one line over another that I might prefer, but I do like the very last–so hard to recognize yourself in that old old mirror, yet there you are. Lovely and luminous work here, Anna.( I leave you a stalk of little bluestem, still clinging hard to a clump of red earth, and the bright blue of an endless plains sky full of hickory wind, as the song plays out to silence)
Thank you Joy, I’m so touched by your kindness. There aren’t words for the sense of kinship I feel with you – foraging together for shiny bits to spin poetry from while enjoying the wind song and the shock of color in a wildflower. I will plant that little bluestem (one of my favorite grasses) in loam and gain happiness from its thriving.
Wow wonderful write. Loved how you weaved such imagery that just tingled the senses as I went through. Very homey family feel to your piece too, really liked the ending as well, very nice!
Thank you Pat, I was trying to write a less experimental, more sense friendly poem to honor women I love so intensely. Glad the homey feeling translated well.
This is breathtaking. Mine is a family of women (5 generations, at the moment), and this spoke to me right to my bones.
Thank you Mama Zen, that means a lot to me. How fortunate you are to have 5 generations of women together!
Your descriptions of the your woods and her home in Taos Mountain are beautiful. I found myself drifting and imagining myself walking through the dense “aspen, blus spruce and bristlecone pines……” You are incredibly gited, and I can not help but feel that your grandmother would be, and possibly is, extremely proud of you.
Two words caught my attention: yarrow, incredibly beautiful word and you placed it perfectly. Kinnikinnick: didn’t really know what this is but googled it……. beautiful too. Thank you for that…
Thank you John, what a kind compliment. I’m glad you were willing to learn about our lovely little berried shrub kinnikinnick.
Really nicely written, sense of home really came through and after reading some of your comments it really provides some backstory, but even without that a wonderfully told piece, thanks for sharing
Thank you kindly Fred!
I soooo love this poem… the imagery is rich, and I can see the magpies flying around and the grandmother teaching the younger ones. I love this verse –
Magpies are inventors via
expansive executive function
insightful passerines
‘catch me if you can’ tricksters
who create their own tools
to dig up the truth
The poem has a mystical, spiritual feel to it … I love it – almost like it is a coming of age time for her granddaughters … she calls the two oldest, but you aren’t able to go yet….
Awesome write 🙂
Thank you, I enjoy mixing in the science wherever possible with the mythic. Happy open link night @ dVerse!
Anna…it’s you who bring a tear to my eye with this write. My idol, my grandmother, is fighting the ever losing battle we all get to fight as the years drift away. Just this week, we had to return her to the hospital for another gamete of tests, where her dignity is left in the waiting room. She has shaped and molded me more than anyone…oh my…this is a stunning, beautiful write…as they always are!
I’m so sorry to hear about your grandmother Tash, you have my deepest empathy. Dignity is so important and so rarely remembered in the way we treat the elderly. Thank you for sharing this with me, my thoughts and prayers are with you. Wonderful, as always, to see you here.
Beauty! Thank you for showing me the beauty of place and the beauty of yours and your grandmother’s soul. Love the last stanza. It brings tears. Blessings!
Thank you for your lovely words, Joanne, blessings to you too!
Beautiful. Very descriptive, and colorful imagery. What a wonderful tribute.
Thank you, Stephen, I wanted to give her something meaningful.
this is absolutely beautiful.. great story, great detail & imagery from start to finish. love it
Thank you Anthony, that’s very kind of you to say.
It sounded like a song from the heart, Anna… sung beautifully too…
Grandmoms have such wonderful stories to share…such lovely memories they help us create… oh yea, a treasure indeed!
It is, thank you for your kindness Kavita; I’m happy to hear your grandmom was also an inspiration.
beautiful imagery as you weave your story…thank you for blessing us all with your poem.
Thank you for your kind comment Laura.
This is a wonderful write…my grandmother was so close to me…she passed away over thirty years ago..I will always miss her. Beautiful poem! Thank you.
Ayala, I’m sorry for your loss, I cried over this yesterday as if I’d just lost her. I know how you feel.
I was captivated by the story… so real are the ties that bind. Beautiful… musical.
Thank you Patricia, I’m glad the poem was successful in captivating you.
Oh Greek goddess of memory if that could just be true. I am glad you have some, memories.
My grandmother had a terrific memory, but not as good as my fathers’, he remembers all 80 years and everyone he ever came in contact with. Apparently I was so far at the other end of that line. I have to write from notes and journals. We are down to 6 left so hold on to all your families as long as you can.
Wow, that’s an amazing memory. Thank you, Sharon, I will heed your sage advice and hold them tightly.
A lush, beautiful panoply of mythic and natural landscapes! Takes my breath away. Magickal! Thank you for this one…
Thank you Charles, panoply is an amazing compliment!
A beautiful poem Anna. I felt as though I was there drinking in the scene and the sounds and the atmosphere of love of family.
Thank you Ann, I’m so happy the atmosphere conveyed the love I wanted to imbue.
such grandeur in this stellar tribute to your grandmother. wonderful that she visits in your dreams.
enjoyed this very much Anna….
Thank you Christi, your kind comment warms my heart.
The love for your grandmother is so apparent. It is such a wonderful write that honours her life and her memory. The birds in flight are a wonderful sight to see and a Magpie arriving was her way of letting you know, write this! Lovely.
Thanks Daydreamertoo and that’s a lovely way of seeing their arrival.
You love for your grandmother shines in your words. She would be so please to read this and know how much she meant to you. You did such a lovely job of expressing your love for her
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/13/a-new-life-begins/
Thank you for your lovely words, I look forward to reading your poem.
Such a beautiful poem filled with love and mystery, memory and muses… the rhythm is wonderful and the nature images so vivid, I could see it all.
Thank you, I am glad the mystery came across well.
Hi Anna my name is Jack Downing and right now I need some help. I went to #1 on the list hoping your experience could help me out. Here is my first problem, when I joined the list I left out a letter in my URL. Instinctively I changed it and now I am listed twice. How can I delete the first entry?
More help needed but I’ll bother someone else, so as not to burden you with my naivete.
Jack, the best thing to do is ask Joe Hesch, tonight’s host to help you or one of the d’Team members, they are the only ones who administer the site. You can put your request in the comments of OLN or you can send an e-mail to someone. Most people, when they see a name twice, check the link so I wouldn’t worry too much. Hope this helps.
Anna…magnificent. This is a warm and rich tribute to an inspirational woman. Visually and emotionally, this sings straight to my heart. Bravo!
Thank you Becky, wonderful that it resonated with you. I find sometimes these personal writes to be the most difficult to find the right tone so that they aren’t about me but highlight our shared experiences.
This has a Native American vibe or fable quality to it that I just loved.
Thank you Dark Angel, I thought that would be the best structure to make this more universal.
This is wonderful!!.. evokes so many senses.. magpies.. string imagery .. deserves more reads.. Difficult to say on light reading.. Wonderful it is
Oops i mean strong imagery 🙂
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
What can I say that hasn’t already been said? Gorgeous poetry.
Beth
Thank you kindly Beth, I look forward to reading your poem.
I enjoyed this tribute to your grandmother, a strong and loving one, from your words. The metaphor of the magpie and nature’s scenes are fitting, as well as resonating with the readers.
Thank you for sharing her with us.
Heaven, she was that, thank you for letting me know the poem is capable of resonating with others. It’s one of the hurdles we face as writers.
A beautifutl family story and all of you so familar in face – now in voice called together by a grandmother who embraces her flock…can feel the emotion in every word…thank you…bkm
Thank you, she really was what held us all together, her death led to an 18 year estrangement among some members of the family.
A lot of great lines in this, Anna, with a particularly strong ending. A beautiful tribute, love-laced in its metaphors and nature imagery. It touches and it sings – what more might I say? Fine work!
Thanks Chris, the mirror bit is scientific fact, why Ravens and Magpies are considered some of the most intelligent animals so I sort of built the piece to lead up to that connecting point with family mirroring each other. Oh, and I realize that your poem had multiple layers I just couldn’t talk about immersive loneliness last night (I had too much emotion around this poem). Yours was an intense piece, well executed. Easier to talk about in the light of day :).
The story of the magpies in your yard is just as fascinating to me as your beautiful poem.
Thank you Mark.
I love these sections:
“Juniper bush patches
quilted with kinnikinnick
orange paintbrushes dotted”
“She begins to mend what is
broken but her own
we are broken but her own”
Thank you Poetry Pastiche.
Anna, this is beautiful, and I love how you described the scenario in your comments above that brought the inspiration for this poem. What fitting way to honor your grandmother. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Thanks Lori, it seemed a good omen and provided better structure that made it work in ways other pieces I’ve written about her don’t.
I love this poem! The magpie imagery is just lovely as is all of the other natural imagery you use. Your grandmother must have been a very special person and very spiritually connected. It shows in your verse.
Thank you Lolamouse, how very kind of you to say, yes she was a very spiritual person.
Beautiful words – bravo.
Anna :o]
Thank you, Anna. I like your spider.
“Black beak burrows damp earth
Grandmother is making cache holes
while aspen eyes keep watch
she buries a writing tablet,
aulos, veil, dual faced masks
scrolls, cithara, globe, and compass
flashes her eye grounding memory
leaves her true gifts and looks me in the eye”
Anna, this is beautiful, your love and ongoing connection to her is felt lovingly.
Thank you for sharing her with us.
~ deb
Thank you Debbie, so wonderful to know the love shines through.
this is deep and heartfelt,
thanks for sharing, you make your grandmother proud…
Thank you Morning, what a lovely thing to say, I try to make her proud.
This left me with tears in my eyes.
Your grandmother moved you very much. And still does, I’m sure. Yes, as you say the love DOES shine through.
Both mine are now long gone, women of earth and feathers too, who made this world a better place.
And when I get to that stage I hope I’m an inspiring grand-ma too.
Jannie with such grandmothers, ‘women of earth and feathers’ as you’ve so marvelously put it, to emulate I’m sure you’ll be an inspiration to your grandchildren!
I don’t know how I missed this one. Holy shit, that made me sob. She’d be so proud of you.
Oh, then I’m so glad you caught it; I don’t know why I didn’t call your attention to it when I posted it forever ago. Once again, I love you!
so much magic when we start to sing one another’s song – seeing ourselves in the reflection of those we love and meet along the way… when i read the prompt, i immediately thought that this would be right up your alley as i think you have fascinating symbolism in all of your writing
Thank you Claudia, I love how you’ve summarized how we encounter others. How wonderful you find the symbolism in my work fascinating, that makes my day :)!
Our loved ones do let us do try to send us so many signs to let us know they haven’t truly ‘gone’
this is so filled with love and deep understanding of life, spirituality and wisdom enough to see those signs. I love the symbol of the raven and magpie because so many people see them as a bad thing and yet, they really aren’t at all. Loved the description of the mountain and trees.
A fabulous, fascinating write Anna and truly a beautiful tribute to those you love.
Thank you so much for your kind words and reread, they mean a lot to me!
Love the mythic and personal qualities. Beautifully handles the prompt.
Thank you, it came immediately to mind when I read Victoria’s fantastic prompt.
Don’t you love it when they almost write themselves. I can feel the strong personality of each character. Congrats. Those poetic flowings are to be treasured.
It is a joy when that occurs. My sick puppies kept me from commenting yesterday. I look forward to reading yours this morning!
Anna–this is just masterful. It starts so strongly and beautifully, and you impossibly build on that. Wow.
Goodness Susan, your generous words make me feel like this poetry writing has some perks :)!
🙂 poetry reading does too–especially when I trip over something like this!
:D!
This is exquisite. I savor the symbology of Native American spirituality/totems. What a beautiful poem for a woman who has clearly influenced you in a profound manner.
Victoria, thank you for the amazing prompt! While life kept me from the time to write a new piece I find your prompts inspire me well into the future. I have two sick puppies and have been delayed in responding and reading but very much look forward to making the rounds today.
Interesting in reading the poem and then your explanation of what it meant to you the writer as to me the reader it had a deeply mythical / creation tone to each drawing on native American symbols
I like that they converge and diverge, part of the excitement of art. Thank you for your feedback!
I knew what I was coming to read, and thought I had the tear ducts disconnected, but alas…we’ve faulty plumbing! Once again, the love and respect is so very felt…and yes…my heart is going pitter-patter as my thoughts go to my grandmother, who has now passed. She would have so enjoyed this…Thank you so much for resharing this…
Oh Tash, I empathize, send hugs, and now I’m tearing up.
Such lyric imagery…beautiful!
Thank you, very nice to meet you.
It’s such a joy to read you! You put so much into your writings. A glimpse into life with your late grannie brought memories in some parts that we can relate to. Thanks for sharing Anna!
Hank
Hank, how nice to hear, thank you!
The Mnemosyne gene skipped me over, although I do remember this. 🙂
Hahaha, thanks, I needed that laugh :).
your grandmother looks very present. it does not look like a photo of another time. for me
one nana wore gloves and hats, collected bulbs in the field, played croquet, made ikebana and travelled by herself to china and japan. the other nana finished her showers in cold water, touched her toes, played music, whistled, made jams and cakes, never still. our magpies look different but they are also sometimes friendly and sometimes fierce. ours have a melodic song.
i sometimes give bread to the magpies and have some seed for the parrots. best wishes. j
They sound like amazing women, I absolutely love how you’ve described them. Their adventurous, artistic and intelligent natures shine through yours. Thank you for this glimpse of them.
A deep and engaging write, Anna, and a fine tribute to what we try so hard to archive in our lives, both coming and going.
Thank you so much for the reread and your ever insightful comments.
not sure from whom I received my Mnemosyne gene. I have an uncle who writes and that is about it.
Your images are breath-taking here, Anna. My grandmother had a similiar effect on me even though she lived a thousand miles away. I would love to have visited your grandmother’s place, and now, I so want to be a Magpie! Other people’s trash is usually my treasure, however, I’m not one who likes to talk a lot.
Great to read something from you. I’ve missed seeing you around. Hope you are well.
Thank you Sheila, I am so happy to hear you had an influential grandmother. My grandparents lived for years in Taos, running an art gallery, donut shop, and construction company. My Dad sometimes would take me to the donut shop at 4 in the morning. To this day I cannot stand being awake at 4 am or the smell of donuts :). That’s awesome you want to be a magpie!
Who wouldn’t want to live in a town called “Taos”?!
It was a fascinating place to be in the 70s.
Anna- I have missed your words…and now after reading this I’m starting to feel educated again!!!…. What a beautiful poem…..the symbols of the earth synonymous with your grandmother – and conversely , your grandmother being ever present…under foot, in sight, in mind…amazing…loved this
Thank you Stu, that’s so nice of you to say. I love you seeing her as ever present, it warms my heart.
Anna, your poems are always so rich with imagery – I confess I do not always feel I have quite the knowledge and at times feel I must be missing some of the deeper meanings. However, I really admire you style and this one in particular resonates with such colour and mythic narrative. You had me hooked.
I love it when the hook works, thanks so much for the feedback :)!
Anna, this is a beautiful and heart opening piece of artistry. Your colors of place are solidly able! One of my favorite stanzas: She begins to mend what is/broken but her own/we are broken but her own. multi-layered brilliance.
Those phrases came out of my first attempt at honoring her (which met the trashcan rather unceremoniously :)). Thanks so much!