Mere Beasts An Epic
(excerpts in bold which represent about 15% of the full work)
Introit 1. Lavinia 2. Ophelia 3. Pictures 4. Death Enters the Room
5. The Intermediary 6. Deep Grief 7. Missionary 8. Pisti 9. Mutilation
10. A Savior Complex 11. Obsession 12. Divided 13. The Trull 14. Maiming
15. River 16. Exile 17. Desert 18. Predators 19. Apophatic
20. Speciousness 21. Phoenix 22. She Who Abides 23. Shame
24. Lively Warrant 25. Judgment 26. Cataphatic 27. Tetra Pylon
28. Flaming Sword 29. Agape 30. Mark of Grace 31. Mere Beasts
32. Elpida 33. Gnosis 34. Imago Dei 35. Redemption 36. Quiddity
37. The Paradoxes 38. Muse 39. Rebirth 40. Sophia
Introit
Titus: An if your highness knew my heart, you were.-
My lord, the emperor resolve me this:
Was it well done of rash Virginius
To slay his daughter with his own right hand,
Because she was enforc’d, stain’d, and deflour’d?
Saturninus: It was Andronicus.
Titus: Your reason mighty lord?
Saturninus: Because the girl should not survive her shame,
And by her presence still renew his sorrows.
Titus: A reason mighty, strong and effectual;
A pattern precedent, and lively warrant,
For me, most wretched to perform the like:-
Die, die Lavinia, and thy shame with thee;
(He kills Lavinia)
And, with thy shame, thy father’s sorrow die!*
*Titus Andronicus (V.iii.38-51) by Shakespeare
King: This is the poison of deep grief;
… poor Ophelia,
Divided from herself and her fair judgment,
Without which we are pictures, or mere beasts.*
* Hamlet (IV.v.40, 48-50) by Shakespeare
1. Lavinia
Lavinia, a name haunted by shame
The daughter who loses all:
Dignity, hands, tongue, maidenhead, self
To receive mercy at her father’s hand
One more victim of life’s grave cruelty
This one born centuries later
Failed by the protection of a father
No husband or brothers to stand with her
She forges bold expressions in paint
With precision, a line well reasoned
And true – cutting through post-modern isms,
Edge of identity and visual field
Her work: prodigious, collected, critiqued
Viewed by the elite –
Discerning, argumentative, and informed
Yet she is gnawed away inside at the sacrifice
Required by her acceptance –
That which is like a man’s –
Hard edged, logical, demanding, and concrete
Where Eros’ sweet invitation is laid fallow,
By ego’s sharp curbing of her free expression
Complexity, variation – her creative forces:
Divergent streams, converging, are still
2. Ophelia
Ophelia, sweet child, dominated by powerful men
Abandoned to grief and madness
Her last moments, a watery slip
May have been unintended consequence
Or dire injury
Consecrated – and yet we wonder
Who is culpable?
A modern woman now faces
The same pernicious forces
That may divide her from her own precious reason
Professor of mathematics, her intellect, ratiocinative,
Attempts to quantify the carrying capacity of the earth
What can it hold, nurture, sustain
Without ruin, lack of renewal,
Or toxic inundation?
Her losses, both great and universal
Small and specific
Her shame-filled love
Will serve as the crucible
Over which her sanity may be fractured
3. Pictures
(Art Critic, Yves) Lavinia’s art is a concatenation
Of architecture, minimalism, post-modernism, and conceptual art
Her meticulous line acknowledges the reality
Of the restricted world in which we find ourselves:
Measured, under surveillance, scientifically dissected
Without irony
Unlike Julie Mehretu’s marks
Which work against a Fascist imposition of order
Conveying a fundamentally humanist message
Lavinia’s work shows the intense naïveté
Of such leanings
Like the steady, deft hand of a butcher
She cleaves idealism at its root!
Unlike women of the past
She shows no propensity to politicize gender
No weakness for sentimentality
No shying away from the cruelty of existence
This fearlessness, an emboldened stance,
A primary ingredient in her acuity
Leads her to a new vision:
A post apocalyptic world without nostalgia
The world as it is becoming:
Crowded, populated by individuals
mainly concerned with their own needs and desires
An open wound
Increasingly destroyed
Not to be made again into paradise
But simply to be destroyed
She is the bravest artist of the 21st century
(Lavinia) Pre-figured symbols and signifiers
Are land mines of meaning and association
Figurative art remains reactionary,
Revealing underlying ideology
Nonrepresentational art isn’t the basis of a movement,
a call to action, or directive
Within it there is no agenda,
Cannon of aesthetics,
Or political ground
The visual language exists within its own independent logic
Unburdened by oppressive modalities
6. Deep Grief
Death entered the rooms of her soul,
Unwelcome and alien
Permeated the air
Sleep was her only comfort,
The denial of dreams
Truth returned each morning, aching
Nothing in her waking hours could drive it away
Time had betrayed her –
No solace gained through its passing
The memory of life before became distant
The memory of her love transfigured into a specter;
A cruel trick
She could feel the world
Slipping from her mind
Meaning drained from her face,
Replaced with an effigy:
Becoming the object of her own scorn
Confusion lined her eyes,
Now emptied of other expression
In the recesses of her secret self she began to be afraid
Not of death, stalking her thoughts, but insanity
A far greater apprehension –
Death is certain,
Sanity not so fixed!
The onset of madness,
Robbing her lucidity, was subtle,
A slow and silent poison
It weighed upon her as if tangible, haunting her
The connection between her innermost being
And the outer world dissolving –
She began mimicking his death
13. The Trull
(Lavinia) I tried so hard to be only one thing,
Contain my multiplicity
Conform to the rules,
In so doing I damaged
The very part of me that I sought to express
Strange how I became a painter
In order to belong to myself; to express a self
To explore the myriad paths to my soul
And ended up wounding it
I became possessed by the world –
At such a small price
How quickly I was lost when tempted
I wanted it – I convinced myself it was the fulfillment of my ambition
I lost my source, my essence, my soul
It was precious, but I did not know to protect it
What does it mean to have lost my integrity?
I am a trull, selling out the soul that fed the work
I wanted to be the center of attention
They are merely circling around me
With no love for me – my humanity
I have only fed them through the mask
A mirror for their projected desires
They are vain; they wanted me to reflect them
My vanity distorted me to their pleasure
Pandering soul!
Starved for love – no integrity at all
Do I pity you or avenge my honor?
For that which was stolen, defiled, and ravaged
I am sick; ill from your poisonous fallacies
Here the world has set my penance
For my lack of discernment
It has robbed me of the tool of my crimes
Poor hand, it was under orders from the world,
My own vain striving!
Justice was swift and absolute
I cannot even seem to make use of myself
I have been deemed unworthy of service –
What is there for me now?
19. Apophatic
(Ophelia) I find that in the process
Of declaring this moment, this thought,
As what defines, delineates me
That in the next moment I reject the idea
I found was all encompassing
The world, my internal landscape
Proves too vast and unknowable
I am always trying to stop
At a point in time to reach contentment,
Clinging to it;
Spreading it thinly across the hours to come
When it wears away I start again and think
(as if it never occurred before)
It will stay!
That I have at last won and the answer is granted –
The key to happiness
23. Shame
(Ophelia) Reality, reality is too cruel!
One moment, no chance to relive things
Reality is for people imprisoned
Addicted to being victimized
I can control my world
That is real freedom
(Who calls this madness?
I will brook no captious dissenters!)
The liberation which we dare not name
Too afraid to even whisper
Who needs society’s labels?
I have found happiness
Control, complete control
Infinitely superior to the curse of reality!
24. Lively Warrant
(Lavinia) Where is my father?
To murder my shame
And as I have embodied it, my own flesh!
There is no such person on this earth
Must I be alone even in this?
There is no mercy for my will lives
Urging me to return home!
Please God, why could not he have done it
Not in compassion but spite
It would still bear the mark of your grace!
Why have you brought me here
If not to let me die – born again to new life?
How can you abandon me?
What need do I have of you
Who brought the shame only death can end
To mark me so that others will recoil,
Feeling that shame as if a spreading disease?
How cruel the cure of death!
What compassion is shown
Stripping me of my self-possession?
Is this how you make me yours?
Declaring my presence as that repulsiveness
Giving me nothing beyond it
As if the whole of my life lost meaning from that moment
I cannot bear it but do not know how to lay it down
Please! You must release me from it!
33. Gnosis
(Lavinia) No wonder Edvard Munch went mad
Thought his mind slipped
He set before him to define life and love
The embrace of life and death
The depths of his emotion
He felt he could grasp it and put it there,
Fixed for public viewing
Each new piece a marker,
A signpost of meaning,
Leading, spiraling towards a complete philosophy
He would not have seen it as his world view
He would have seen it as truth – the truth
A search to express the truth can only lead to madness
It clings to the singular when multiplicity is required
The resulting fracture –
Making multiplicity into duality (love/hate, life/death)
Forcing it all into unities of form breaks the vessel
The mind cannot will the one truth into being
The mind is not unified, it too is many,
Pressure snaps the psyche as it
Tries to reject the truth that surrounds it
Truth it cannot comprehend, label or convey
Mere beasts, indeed … a wilderness of cognitions and gnossalia here — whew. Women in literature have for so many centuries borne the projections of thier authors, the mantle of divine witch that is almost impossible to break free of, revealing the real person underneath. Taking all of history (or some massive archipelageos of it) to task in a single poem is a necessarily mad engagement. Fortunately there is a cast to employ, a litany of selves and voice, the mythic constellations. Personally I found the figure of Ophelia one I could follow better, being more familair with her masks and motifs. Lavoina I read as the modern incarnation of her, with all the burden of history and yet with enough tools at hand to accomplish a temporary dislocation of the mask. For all its density, it was a fluid, fun read. Real brain candy – or perhaps a salt lick for the cognitive beasts that swim the mere … – Brendan
The full epic (which is 40 chapters) includes Hagia or Saint Sophia (Heavenly Wisdom) and her daughters Elpida (Hope), Pisti (Faith), and Agape (Love) who stem from the Greek Pistis, Elpis, and Sophrosyne. The mythos of the soul plays out in Sophia. “Alienated through their own fault from their heavenly home, souls have sunk down into this lower world without utterly losing the remembrance of their former state, and filled with longing for their lost inheritance, these fallen souls are still striving upwards. In this way the Mythos of the fall of Sophia can be regarded as having archetypal significance. The fate of the “mother” was regarded as the prototype of what is repeated in the history of all individual souls, which, being of a heavenly pneumatic origin, have fallen from the upper world of light their home, and come under the sway of evil powers, from whom they must endure a long series of sufferings till a return into the upper world be once more vouchsafed them.”
In my epic the sisters Ophelia and Lavinia connect to various incarnations of personified love, faith, and hope, ultimately attaining a release from the oppression of their namesakes/archetypes/engendered selves through a gnosis of the Goddess Sophia (really going back to the primordial Goddess Ana). There’s an excellent theological book called She Who Is that talks about the role of Sophia, or the sacred feminine, in the trinity. I chose Lavinia and Ophelia because their lives are dominated by others. Their struggles involve developing a self free from the projected concerns and desires of others. As you so aptly put it, “a temporary dislocation of the mask” is achieved through the consciousness of the higher self. Thank you so much for the feedback. Honestly, I didn’t think anyone would read the excerpts let alone mine its themes. Your insight has been invaluable and I am immeasurably grateful. I especially appreciated your understanding of the use of glossolalia as appropriate to the subject. “Taking all of history (or some massive archipelagoes of it) to task in a single poem is a necessarily mad engagement.” Yes, it is taking me several years!
Nothing like an epic to help bring a soul into sharper focus — even if no one ever gets around to reading the whole damned thing! (Girth is one of the victims of cyber-attention-spans.) I think in Eastern Orthodoxy Sophia is included in the trinity — Father, Son, Sophia — at least some sects. (I’ll take a watery low soul over a pneumatic spirit anytime.) I love gnosticism and its dark digestion really helps to show the underworld of culture and the radical vision available to all of us, if we do our labors in Hell and keep the whole thing moving. Please do. Some pages can’t be turned until your epic is done. – Brendan
This is amazing work!
Thank you, I am honored you read it.
Truly astounding stuff… more bits for this soul to chew on a bit later. Yet urgency calls to further peruse.
Bon appetit, thank you so much for reading and commenting!
I was expecting to echo Brendan with a natural relationship to the Ophelia motif, but I found the voice of Lavina devastatingly personal and real (though really, the voices are all the same kinned woman, yes, just as sisters and brothers sing the most piercing of harmonies/antiphonals?) I can only imagine the immensity of inner ground you had to plow over, and under, to get to this layer of realization. The section titled Deep Grief is one of the best descriptions of that state I’ve read in prose, poetry or psychology. Thanks for doing this heavy lifting within the female psyche, for placing it in context to a greater world, and I look forward to someday seeing the whole.
I love your analogy of the harmonies/antiphonals. In the larger work Lavinia and Ophelia are characters, archetypes, spiritual beings and hopefully ultimately psychologically real. Your comments went straight to my heart because the emotional honesty of the work has to start with my own self awareness as a writer. While neither character is me I have to be vulnerable and open to get to those layers. Harold Bloom claimed that Shakespeare had circumscribed men’s souls but I’ve always felt that the female psyche is still buried to some extent in literature. I wanted to look back, see what’s here now, and envision a more empowered future. Now I have probably jumped off the deep end but the issues are clearly close to my heart. Thank you seems trite at this point but I have a deep esteem for your engagement of the work.
Seriously Cool Anna, I also found a resonance in ‘Deep Grief’, I have read it all, but I think I shall come back on Wednesday to read again, when I will have much more time to really do your work justice. What an amazing enterprise, true respect for all the hard work and soul divining you have clearly undertaken, to realise these words. It would like to read the whole version, and I think you should publish it as a book, I hope you will.
How lovely for you to stop by and with your usual perspicacity get to the core of things. The divining as you called it is part of why the work has taken years and I am deeply humbled by your acknowledgment. I’m in a terribly noisy cafe on the verge of tears of happiness so I will also come back to thanking you. 🙂
Interesting development of the idea and as well as form
Thank you, I am still struggling with the form and the development but am encouraged by your feedback.
As I read, I thought it a play in poetry. As I continued it became a ballet. As odd as it seems, I choreographed the entire thing in my head. It lies somewhere spatial like a museum and the ballet is at once precise and formal as the work of Balanchine, leaping as the ABT of Baryshnikov and includes elements of Merce Cunningham, Martha Graham, Jerome Robbins, Alvin Ailey, and Twyla Tharp. Therein lies myth and death competing for the essence of woman, her body, her medicine, her sexuality, her reason, her mind. It danced like a dream. Thank you for linking today. It’s a magnificent piece.
You all realize that this is only going to encourage me to finish this! I have about three quarters of it and its been haunting me this last year. Gay, you sure know how to paint pictures (or dance) with words! Thank you for reading it and your marvelous ballet of mythic proportions.
Holy moly. And they say epics are dead. It takes a very dedicated poet with abnormal levels of stamina and Narrative-orientated imagination to pen an epic… Lordy… well done. First one I’ve ever read on a blog
It’s just because we keep trying to kill them. Don’t worry, when I do finish this (i have about 30 of the 40 chapters finished) I won’t post it on the blog! Thanks for all the enthusiasm.
“A post apocalyptic world without nostalgia…” seems to embody all the wondrous tapestries self-weaving here. Identities are locked in the reality of the conscience seeking forward journeys while frantically treading water!
Especially loved the persona of Lavinia, realising that the world could never be her reality. It cursed and curcified her until she found her own voice in her own craft.
A welter of rich epic images!
I could die a happy poet today. Thank you.
Anna, a formidable task you’ve assumed here and handled with skill and insight. Quite an amazing effort and one we are grateful to have the opportunity to read. I am in awe…
JamieDedes
Thank you so much for your encouragement Jamie!
what i love here anna is that you took it into today…and you’re diving deep into psychology as well with your characters here…this is a precisely woven and crafted piece.. i think if i would read it again it would speak to me on another level and next time, i would stumble upon another line – this is like a dish, cooked with great patience and with lots of different spices which give a very special taste and you have to get familiar with the spices first to be able to recognize them…i know some of them and looking forward to discovering more..
Thank you Claudia, yes the psychology was the most important piece, to really flesh out the characters. As this is only 15% of the final poem I know it’s a bit disorienting as a series of pictures from the whole. I do so appreciate your time and feedback!
Yikes, Anna. Your poem (del. that) WORK takes me into so many worlds: mythology, literature, art history, sacred history. I need to spend time with this to even begin to glean everything that’s here. I thought the chapter outline as the intro to the work was quite clever and did I understand you to say that there are missing pieces? I confess to feeling quite inadequate when it comes to truly apprehending the many nuances you’ve written into this. Amazing lady!
Yes, this is about 15% of the final work (way too big to post and time consuming for others to read). These excerpts were initially linked to a One Stop Poetry prompt on myth. I’ve written 90% of the poem but need to resolve some aspects before completing it, one of my goals this year. Thank you very much for taking the time to engage it today and for another inspiring prompt.
This is amazing, depthful work! So much to think about here.
Thank you Mary, I enjoyed your interpretation of Erica Jong
A lot of work here! There is a wonderful rhythm and back and forth between the traditional stories and the present. Tremendously ambitious and very interesting.
Thank you, your Christopher Marlowe work also brought the present to the forefront.
ok, for sure it is epic…# 6 spoke to me though…particularly…In the recesses of her secret self she began to be afraid
Not of death, stalking her thoughts, but insanity
A far greater apprehension –
Death is certain,
Sanity not so fixed!
this is relatable and you balance that well against every thing else in this and allow us to connect to the more complex parts…
Thanks Brian, I think only having excerpts from the epic makes it more difficult to find handholds as well. I’m glad that section spoke to you and that you found parts to connect with. Mostly I’m grateful for all the time you spend reading and commenting on our work at dVerse, we’re all fortunate to have this community.
Anna- WOW, just WOW. It took me two days to finish but I am so impressed here. When we sit back in bed at night and ponder thoughts of grandeur, very few of those fancied dreams could compare to what you’ve actually done with this piece. You’ll have to let me know when it’s finished, would love to read. Thanks, and I also learned something- It is definitely wise to peruse the archives, as gems most certainly exist- this is proof of that:)
Well, when I dreamt of readers and comments I never imagined any as grand as you and this :)! When it is finished, which I’ve promised myself to do here very soon, I’ll let you know. I’d love feedback on the whole 40 chapters (though it shouldn’t take too long to read) and I would be happy to return the reading/commenting favor on your work. Thank you, really, thank you.
each new piece a marker,
A signpost of meaning,
Leading, spiraling towards a complete philosophy
He would not have seen it as his world view
He would have seen it as truth – the truth
how admirable lines, I am amazed that your words always travel far and wide, giving many meanings for readers to poner.
keep it up.
😉
Yes I like to imbue the work with ideas to ponder; thank you for the encouragement.
A Femalic voice for voice’s poetic with minds to speak and hearts to share. A long but entertaining journey through your thoughts and observations.
http://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2011/10/15/conversations/
Glad it entertained through the length; hopefully that will be true of the whole.
As always, you astound with your breadth, the depth and scope of your subject, and all those lovely words. Thank you for showing us this unfinished epic of yours.
Thank you Gene, I deeply appreciate your time, feedback, and willingness to travel alongside in my poetry’s scope.